Please read my song and tell me what you think

» Song Critiques // 2009-03-18 19:45:06

song name: "2 1/2 weeks" Who do you think you're fooling now, with your bloody wrists, and half baked lies, with your meaningless words, you say love when you mean fuck, you believe drama is everything, in which you created, but in which you hate, you truly love, you fake these tendencies, to gather sorrow, so you'll have em' in bed tomorrow, sleep with one, sleep with all, never say no, even with that ring you show, you wastes lives, on your empty words, and immature vices, these lies you build, bigger than the life you have, you sell out people, for personal gain, which you seek to defame, and when you're alone, with no one on the phone, you realize true sorrow, and what it means to be hollow