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» Song Critiques // 2012-06-18 23:20:42

Hello all, new song i wrote, played all instuments and recorded, what can I do better? I do admit I'm not a great singer, but also looking for inputs on the music and recording which will help me alot in further recording. Was the lyric's ok? was the music ok? and was the recording ok? Very much appricated for any help at all..... thank you all ..Dave http://www.americansongspace.com/davidtate/