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» Song Critiques // 2010-11-02 04:08:07

Just finished this one. Looking for opinions. It runs on a fairly fast tempo GREYHOUND BUS VERSE 1 When we first met you told me I'm the perfect gal for you You liked the way I did things and you swore you would be true But now you stay out all night long, you like to run around If you were just a dog I'd simply take you to the pound CHORUS Cause you're not too bright and its not your fault You're just made that way It's how you grew up Grab yourself a beer and a sandwich if you must Cause you know that they wont feed you on that greyhound bus VERSE 2 I cooked and cleaned and stayed at home and took good care of you But you brought in your momma Just to tell me what to do She told me I was terrible and always made a fuss I hope you both are comfy in the backseat of that bus CHORUS Cause you're not too bright and its not your fault You're just made that way It's how you grew up Grab yourself a beer and a sandwich if you must Cause you know that they wont feed you on that greyhound bus VERSE 3 When you're both gone I'll change the locks and throw out all your stuff I'll have a drink and just relax cause I have had enough With all the extra closet space The shopping will not stop I'll call my friends, we'll have some fun and party til we drop CHORUS Cause you're not too bright and its not your fault You're just made that way It's how you grew up Grab yourself a beer and a sandwich if you must Cause you know that they wont feed you on that greyhound bus Get yourself a one-way ticket on that greyhound bus Copyright © 2010 Sieg Kientoff. All Rights Reserved.