Song critique

» Song Critiques // 2010-03-14 17:36:48

Hi there, I've added several songs I've written since last need for critique for someone to check out. I've tried to make the songs longer in time and a little variation in them. They are Paradise (trying to be like Radiohead) Venice (currently a rough draft) Try Something New (faster tempo?) Sweet Simone http://www.americansongspace.com/1d31cfd6393746e899ff70481e26e8713d842b77/ Any suggestions for improvements welcome.