lend me your ear . . .

» Song Critiques // 2010-02-03 00:37:50

this is a work tape i recorded one very late, very drunken night. its a lofi recording, but i was wondering what peers would think about the song, any feedback would be appreciated. tips on vocal, structure and ideas on instrumentation would be especially helpful. have a listen www.americansongspace.com/thelazarustapes email comments thelazarustapes@gmail.com