Critique of songwriting

» Song Critiques // 2010-01-17 13:35:59

Hi there, Seeking constructive critique of my songs. Sorry forgot to post my URL link last time. You cand find songs here. http://www.americansongspace.com/1d31cfd6393746e899ff70481e26e8713d842b77 Also on www.myspace.com/eleltoro Thanks