Lyric Critique Please!----Rock/Alt., no music

» Song Critiques // 2010-01-15 01:16:12

I BLAME YOU I press my face against the mirror And I don't like what I see Because I know I've found the liar Among all the sanctity Between love and false promises You've led me to believe I could do no better, but not much worse And I started playin' games just like you were But I found the mistakes Among the pain that we've exchanged Now do you see? You're the reason I can't sleep All these weeks alone I picture your face, I'm weak When I used to be strong I know it's no use And it's all I'll do It's my fault, too But I blame you I've been waiting this whole time To tell you I was wrong I call and call but you Never pick up your phone How do I take back this pain The hell I put myself through Thoughts that whisper reasons I should've trusted you But I found the mistakes Among the pain that we've exchanged Now do you see? You're the reason I can't sleep All these weeks alone I picture your face, I'm weak When I used to be strong I know it's no use And it's all I'll do It's my fault, too But I blame you So what now? What Devil's road should I walk? Because the last angel I ever knew Just turned out and never stopped! But I found the mistakes Among the pain we've exchanged Now do you see? You're the reason I can't sleep All these weeks alone I picture your face, I'm weak When I used to be strong I know it's no use And it's all I'll do It's my fault, too But I blame you, I, I, I, I..... You're the reason I can't sleep All these weeks alone I picture your face, I'm weak When I used to be strong I know it's no use And it's all I'll do It's my fault, too But I blame you I blame you Oh yes, I blame you I blame you © Braiden Ross THE LOVELIEST GOODBYE It's been so long since I ran my fingers through your hair And saw those eyes that took my breath and made me stare You left me in the rain, left for I don't know where I need to see you, to be near you, just need to feel you once again [BRIDGE] I think I'm dying if you've got to leave So make this our last time? Make me believe! [CHORUS] Let yourself indulge like never before! Make it good and leave it all on the floor! Take me down and let me drown In your wave after wave, you see If loving you means killing me, Then it will be the loveliest goodbye Where did you go, are you coming back to me? Oh, that's great well, baby, we should meet What's that? You're in town just one day this week? But you don't understand, need to love you and, I'll do everything I can [BRIDGE] [CHORUS] Let yourself go free like never before Make it right and leave it all at the door Take me down and let me drown In your wave after wave, you see If loving you means killing me [BRIDGE] [BRIDGE] [CHORUS] © Braiden D Ross