Reposting w/ link: Critique my songs?

» Song Critiques // 2009-11-23 10:44:28

http://www.americansongspace.com/ryanholweger/ Hello - I'm rather new here, and would love some feedback on my songs. I have two songs from my last record up, along with 5 demos that I recorded a few nights ago....the demos are pretty rough, but you'll get the idea of the song. Hope you can check it out and provide some feedback, etc. Thanks